Submitted by Chris Thomas on Tue, 06/20/2017 - 11:11
It’s the first day of summer, when I always wish I’d done more to drop a couple of pounds before shimmying into a swimsuit.
Like people, sentences also get a bit flabby if writers don’t exercise some self-control at the keyboard. Here are a couple of recent examples from editing gigs:
My Mother’s Day weekend treat was five hours of bliss – and not in a pricey salon or spa. I went to the opera at my local movie theater.